Friday, 5 February 2010

Rhino, almost repeated.

 
I took the original version of this painting to my art class on Monday, where it was discussed with Steve Cook.
Steve liked the Rhino and made one or two observations which he thought would improve the picture in order to improve the position of the focal point, 'The Rhino'
I accepted his valuable suggestions and implemented those where it was practical to do so. The main change was reducing the size of the picture along the left hand side and also along the bottom.

1 comment:

  1. Does look better for the cropping, Beryl xx

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